Perhaps try calling him dense as he did you? His idea of what constitutes love is obviously amiss.For my edification, can you suggest some ways I could have posted to demonstrably love you?
Perhaps try calling him dense as he did you? His idea of what constitutes love is obviously amiss.For my edification, can you suggest some ways I could have posted to demonstrably love you?
I probably am dense.Perhaps try calling him dense as he did you? His idea of what constitutes love is obviously amiss.
Well, how long did it take for you to catch on to him?I probably am dense.
I was right. Since I have mass, I am dense and voluminous.I probably am dense.
I have never called you a liar. If you believe otherwise, please reference the post. I haven't even called you disingenuous, though I believe your understanding is incorrect.
So far, I have asked you questions, and characterized your responses. For my edification, can you suggest some ways I could have posted to demonstrably love you?
I appreciate the detailed analysis of the poem, but my interest in your opinion was strictly a matter of message. Any thoughts?I referenced the post in #21.
If you had not liked #11,818 in the UGE thread, I would not have believed you disliked me,
so who is confused?
Re your poem:
I saw you in church and I shook your hand. [A, approximate rhyme, iambic meter, tetrameter throughout]
I told you how eternity is going to be grand. [A, approximate rhyme, parallelism, alliteration, iambic meter]
I never saw the heartache that your eyes pleaded: [B, parallelism, irony, irregular meter]
Won't you just love me in the way that is needed? [B, four meters, poser: who is asking the question]
I saw you broken down on the side of the road. [C, parallelism continues, meter ends with two anapests; broken echoes heartache]
I gave you a ride as your car was towed. [C, parallelism, iamb-anapest-anapest-iamb]
Of your financial situation I never inquired, [D, mainly iambic, never echoes previous never]
And I never loved you in the way you required. [D, mainly iambic, required echoes needed]
I didn't see you in church so I called on the phone. [E, mainly iambic, contrast with two previous saws]
I told you it's not good to be all alone. [E, parallelism, mainly iambic, poser: who is all alone]
I never considered visiting as I hung up undaunted, [F, parallelism, mainly iambic, poser: why undaunted]
And I never loved you in the way that you wanted. [F, parallelism, mainly iambic, wanted echoes required & needed]
Love is not Love just because you show care. [G, anapestic meter, poser: what is love]
Love becomes love when you're succinctly aware [G, parallelism, anapestic meter, [poser: succinctly aware]
That you cannot love according to generic creeds. [H, irregular meter, poser: generic creeds]
Love becomes love when it actually meets others needs. [H, parallelism, pentameter, poser: why no love]
Isaiah 45:4 For Jacob my servant's sake, and Israel mine elect....
I would say so, its called being born again.Do you believe wheat can become tares, and tares become wheat?
What do you believe the teaching concerning wheat and tares mean?
I appreciate the detailed analysis of the poem, but my interest in your opinion was strictly a matter of message. Any thoughts?
Everything reproduces after its kind. Never in nature has a tare become wheat, or a goat become a lamb.I would say so, its called being born again.
In the post that I liked, was you being called a liar the only thing written in the post? Or was more in the post that was under consideration?I liked the poetry, but the message did not seem consistent with the posers.
The first three stanzas seemed to be a developing love story, although the final lines in each foreshadowed a sad ending.
Thus, I would prefer reworking the final stanza so there was a breakthrough in the relationship with a happy ending.
However, if you prefer the sad ending, then I suggest revamping conclusion along the following lines:
Re "Love is not Love just because you show care.": Realize that love IS showing you care, but it takes two to tango.
Re "Love becomes love when you're succinctly aware": Perhaps "acutely" would be better than succinctly?
Re "That you cannot love according to generic creeds.": Perhaps "That love is not simply rote memory of creeds"?
Re "Love becomes love when it actually meets others needs.": Omit "actually" because it disrupts the meter.
One of us is still confused re you liking me being called a liar. That does not meet my need.
In the post that I liked, was you being called a liar the only thing written in the post? Or was more in the post that was under consideration?
For the record, I don't believe you are a liar. I do believe your understanding is wrong about a number of things. Simply because you believe you have reconciled scripture doesn't mean others accept the way you handle scripture.
I appreciate your thoughts, and your conclusion fits well with your understanding and inclinations. But when I write poetry, my purpose isn't to have a happy ending. I'm writing either to share some insight or challenge people to action. The purpose of the poem isn't to see where one might be exercising love, but where they neglect to do so and are ignorant of their shortcoming. What often appears loving superficially may not hold up under scrutiny. Many are convinced they are very loving in their own mind when their actions fall short of actually loving another. If you read the poem and are not moved to consider that you can be more loving, I have failed in my goal.It was the gist of the post, but I am glad to learn that you think I am merely mistaken about some number of things,
which I trust does not include the kerygma, so that we can continue discussions respectfully without liking demeaning posts.
What do you think of my thoughts regarding the last stanza?
Everything reproduces after its kind. Never in nature has a tare become wheat, or a goat become a lamb.
When we are born again, we remain human. We have simply become a new humanity, a new creation.
Do you believe I blaspheme God and attribute hatred of humanity to Him?For the record, I don't believe you are a liar.