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Stay tuned to this thread. It will change your life.

--and yes, there's an echo.
 
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It just changed mine. I am now 27 seconds older than when I opened it.
 
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Is this change a good thing or a bad thing that we speak of?
 
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"The change it had to come........we knew it all along............."
 
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So this is the first episode of just one of the various Christian comics I'm working on. This episode is a tad longer and wordier than usual because it's explaining stuff, and you'll notice the System Comics...that's because this is before I chose a different overall name for my work. I have one other version of this. Which do you think will work better, or any suggestions for blending ideas between the two are good too.
 
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Roughsoul1991

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I don't know much about comics but looks legit to me. Keep it up!
 
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My preference is the first, full version. However, I'm afraid it's too wordy and long, scaring away readers before they get to the normally paced episodes
 
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It is really a lot of words for comics but possibly you could have a intro page describing everything a brief as possible
 
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Well at the moment, until I get substantial feedback, I'm dividing the teaching and the story into two separate mini series for like the first 11 episodes, then I'll combine them at the point then talking isn't as beefy and the story is intended to be more serious and the reader is familiar enough with the story to follow. I'll probably still eventually redo the combined start with a less frightening hunk of vocabulary
 
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If Asteroid Boy is well receive perhaps you could consider doing a spin-off comic about Meteor Man.
 
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Thanks guys. How's this?
 
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you are so important for god
 
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I just turned into a Unicorn after opening this thread. Very well done :p
 
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Demi777 said:
I just turned into a Unicorn after opening this thread. Very well done :p
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A unicorn, huh? Well I can PM you where to read more like this. Action adventure, horror, humor, sentimental. Yup, even visiting Noah.
 
Demi777

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A unicorn, huh? Well I can PM you where to read more like this. Action adventure, horror, humor, sentimental. Yup, even visiting Noah.
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I am sure it would be nice but its hard to type with hooves.. Typos and stuff ya know
 
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