Let's put this whole thing in order.
1. She didn't come here for fellowship, or to be part of the community, or to join in our discussions, or to learn about the Bible.
2. She came here for a very specific reason, which is quite outside of the purpose of this forum.
3. She came here, as a business major, to do research for a college paper.
4. Since she came here only to do college work on her major, so I gave her advice on her major... advice which I thought was entirely appropriate.
5. If you can't find the problems in her post, you need to look closer. It's an absolute horror. I can pick it apart later; but surely you could sort it out yourself.
6. If we're all chatting and socializing, I NEVER say a word about anyone's spelling or grammar. It's rude and inappropriate.
But that isn't the context here.
She didn't come here to chat, socialize, fellowship, discuss spiritual things, or be part of the community...
she came here to work on her business major.
So I talked to her about that.
She came here to work on her business major, so I talked to her about her business major.
I think it's appropriate to tell someone the business world is going to kick you in the face if you can't even compose a decent sentence.
I think explaining that to someone, directly, is a kindness.
Hopefully, if someone will talk straight to her, she can take steps to correct the problems.