Lovesong Poetry

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I understand full well about confusion. I would explain right now but I am pressed for time.
It's okay.
I understand, this is not an easy thing at all.
Patience is my life lesson, this is good practice.
take your time...I got eternity. ;)

not to be sarcastic, I just wanted to fit that in there,
thought it would lighten the mood.
 

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(this may already be in the thread somewhere.. but it seems pretty appropriate to me! )

Lovesong - The Cure

Whenever I'm alone with you
You make me feel like I am home again
Whenever I'm alone with you
You make me feel like I am whole again

Whenever I'm alone with you
You make me feel like I am young again
Whenever I'm alone with you
You make me feel like I am fun again

However far away
I will always love you
However long I stay
I will always love you
Whatever words I say
I will always love you
I will always love you

Whenever I'm alone with you
You make me feel like I am free again
Whenever I'm alone with you
You make me feel like I am clean again

However far away
I will always love you
However long I stay
I will always love you
Whatever words I say
I will always love you
I will always love you

it wasn't the poet's (Robert Smith) original intention, but to me this is a lovesong to Christ -- because Jesus is the one who makes makes me clean and free, who gives me joy and makes me new: Jesus makes me whole and is carrying me home! i will always love Him!
 
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(this may already be in the thread somewhere.. but it seems pretty appropriate to me! )

Lovesong - The Cure

Whenever I'm alone with you
You make me feel like I am home again
Whenever I'm alone with you
You make me feel like I am whole again

Whenever I'm alone with you
You make me feel like I am young again
Whenever I'm alone with you
You make me feel like I am fun again

However far away
I will always love you
However long I stay
I will always love you
Whatever words I say
I will always love you
I will always love you

Whenever I'm alone with you
You make me feel like I am free again
Whenever I'm alone with you
You make me feel like I am clean again

However far away
I will always love you
However long I stay
I will always love you
Whatever words I say
I will always love you
I will always love you

it wasn't the poet's (Robert Smith) original intention, but to me this is a lovesong to Christ -- because Jesus is the one who makes makes me clean and free, who gives me joy and makes me new: Jesus makes me whole and is carrying me home! i will always love Him!
Right on.

i tried to do a cover of this song, but I got too shy and erased it.
 
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Scary

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why is it,
they say I am the one who is
always running away,

when I am right here,
just being me.

I am here!

i am not hiding,
I am right here...

and you aren't

Who cares...​
 
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Scary

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In conclusion..

i want to tell every reader that read this
the truth.

i lied...

I made this all up,

there is no guy I dream of,
there is nobody that loves me like that,
nor do they want to marry me.

its all a ruse.
they don't even know I exist,
and they never will.

it turns out I'm crazy, and a narcissist.

i did it all for the attention...


You can all go away now..

just leave me alone...

i dont want want anymore lies..

just the truth for once..

just go away..


 
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Lovesong

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Free Will

I want to be with someone my own age,
someone who will not turn me into some
fantasy they believe I can be for them,
to make their master the devil happy,
so they can disprove the existence of Christ.

Reincarnation is not real.

I want to be with someone who is not ashamed of me.

I want to be with somebody who can be themselves with me.

I want to be with a man who will call me "princess"
not b--- .. Well ..you know what you called me.

i want to be with someone who will not force
themselves to be with me,
and then manipulate the situation to make it
look like love.

...it's called free will and
no pretty much means no.



 
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Lovesong

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Go ahead,
move on.

This is getting ridiculous and
stupid..

Just make sure you let me go,

let me go

so I can be happy
living in the truth.
so you can be true to whoever you are
going to be with next.

Let me go.
let me be free.
Let me go.​
 
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Free Will

I want to be with someone my own age,
someone who will not turn me into some
fantasy they believe I can be for them,
to make their master the devil happy,
so they can disprove the existence of Christ.

Reincarnation is not real.

I want to be with someone who is not ashamed of me.

I want to be with somebody who can be themselves with me.

I want to be with a man who will call me "princess"
not b--- .. Well ..you know what you called me.

i want to be with someone who will not force
themselves to be with me,
and then manipulate the situation to make it
look like love.

...it's called free will and
no pretty much means no.



Interesting poem.

Does it really refer to love?

Does it mean that breaking one's marriage promise is acceptable?

I wasn't sure how to take it.
 
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Lovesong

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Interesting poem.

Does it really refer to love?

Does it mean that breaking one's marriage promise is acceptable?

I wasn't sure how to take it.
No ..and it's not a poem, and I am not married.

just a prisoner..
 
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Lovesong

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Free Will

you want me to prove myself to you,
to prove to you that I love you.

..but I don't love you, I did..
Only because you
were reaching out to me,
I never understood why
I feel as though I wasted my time
on you.

Pressing on the right memory side of my mind
Brings no past, because there are no
memories.

She's not real, and she's not me.
she will never be me.
That's a demon and you were fooled.

I don't know why you bothered me so much,
but I don't think it's love.

you can't even be yourself with me.

just let me go.
so I can find someone my own age.

i don't have to prove anything to you..​
 
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Lovesong

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You are an insecure little man,
and I don't have to prove anything to you.

 
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Lovesong

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A couple nights ago I had his dream..

It was about you getting married
to this perfect woman, who looked like a tall blond model.
She looked good to you, she looked good
to this world.
She was acceptable because she was a part of the world,

its what they wanted so naturally it's what you wanted.

i didn't see you in it but I kept hearing your name,
like you were too ashamed to see me.

It's what everyone wanted and it is what you
wanted. That is what you were trying to
tell me.

not that this means anything to you.

I bought diet pills,
because I am trying to lose weight,
God kept convicting me not to take them,
so I didn't take them.
i don't need acceptance or love from you or the world,
God is all I need.
Cause in the end when I am left alone,
God is still with me.

I don't know why you assume I am stupid,
or you try to manipulate to situation
and me
to fit your

"comfort" zone.

i was never comfortable in this..

at all.

its over,
now move on with what's acceptable to you.



 

tourist

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No ..and it's not a poem, and I am not married.

just a prisoner..
...perhaps a prisoner of war. These stone walls do not a prison make, nor iron bars a cage...read that someplace years ago but still holds true today.
 
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Lovesong

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War...
funny word.

I've been hearing that word a lot lately.
A lot of battles lost, and sacrifices made,
plenty of unfair things in this world..

However.
I'm not worried,
I am at peace.
*Spoiler Alert* My side wins
the war.

it is finished.
 
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Lovesong

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348. To Althea, from Prison
Poem by: Richard Lovelace. 1618–1658


WHEN Love with unconfinèd wings
Hovers within my gates,
And my divine Althea brings
To whisper at the grates;
When I lie tangled in her hair
And fetter'd to her eye,
The birds that wanton in the air
Know no such liberty.

When flowing cups run swiftly round
With no allaying Thames,
Our careless heads with roses bound,
Our hearts with loyal flames;
When thirsty grief in wine we steep,
When healths and draughts go free—
Fishes that tipple in the deep
Know no such liberty.

When, like committed linnets, I
With shriller throat shall sing
The sweetness, mercy, majesty,
And glories of my King;
When I shall voice aloud how good
He is, how great should be,
Enlargèd winds, that curl the flood,
Know no such liberty.

Stone walls do not a prison make,
Nor iron bars a cage;
Minds innocent and quiet take
That for an hermitage;
If I have freedom in my love
And in my soul am free,
Angels alone, that soar above,
Enjoy such liberty.
 
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Lovesong

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how you can tell I am not right for you.
how you can tell I am not the one for you.

everything you do and say bugs me.
I push you away.
i tell you, I am not the one.
I do not come to see you.

There are plenty of beautiful women in the world,
who will
"appreciate" what a complete ...---
you are.

now go on into your little mouse creep corner
hole in the wall
and continue to feel sorry for yourself.

you bother me..
just leave me alone.

I don't want to be with you.​
 

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348. To Althea, from Prison
Poem by: Richard Lovelace. 1618–1658


Stone walls do not a prison make,
Nor iron bars a cage;
Minds innocent and quiet take
That for an hermitage;
If I have freedom in my love
And in my soul am free,
Angels alone, that soar above,
Enjoy such liberty.
Absolutely beautiful! Thank you so very much!
 
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Lovesong

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Absolutely beautiful! Thank you so very much!
You're welcome. I looked it up and found it online, because I was curious about the saying.
It's about being optimistic about being in a prison cell. Looking on the bright side of a downside.
kind of depressing, but hopeful in that aspect.

It's a good poem.

not something I would be optimistic about personally if I were in a similar situation.
 
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Lovesong

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Tell Your Heart to Beat Again
Lyrics by: Phillips, Craig and Dean

Forgiven
If only you’d forgive yourself
You’ve been made new
But you’re standing where you fell
Because when you look in the mirror
It seems like all you ever see
Are the scars of every failure
And the you that you used to be


Tell your heart to beat again
Close your eyes and breathe it in
Let the shadows fall away
You’ll live to love another day
Yesterday’s a closing door
And you don’t live there anymore
So say goodbye to where you’ve been
And tell your heart to beat again


Forgiven
Just let that word wash over you
It’s all right now
Love’s healing hands have pulled you through
So, get back up and take step one
And now you’re new life has begun
And know that if the Son has set you free
Then you are free indeed!


Tell your heart to beat again
Close your eyes and breathe it in
Let the shadows fall away
You’ll live to love another day
Yesterday’s a closing door
And you don’t live there anymore
So say goodbye to where you’ve been
And tell your heart to beat again


Hope is reaching from a rugged cross
Where a perfect love recaptured all the innocence that’s lost
And mercy’s calling from an empty grave
So lift your eyes to heaven
And hear your Savior say


Tell your heart to beat again
Close your eyes and breathe it in
Let the shadows fall away
You’ll live to love another day
Yesterday’s a closing door
And you don’t live there anymore
So say goodbye to where you’ve been
And tell your heart to beat again

[video=youtube_share;acfKyLOm2Kw]http://youtu.be/acfKyLOm2Kw[/video]​
 
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Lovesong

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I would rather be hated by
creeps than controlled by em..
bunch of suck ups anyway..

Whatever it takes for me to be free.
i don't care anymore..


Freedom feels great.

never been happier.

freedom is all I need.

i am free.​
 
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