Seriously guys, I don't know why we're having this conversation.
The OP said she's working on a business major, and it just so happens she writes like a 10-year-old.
So I said her writing was bad, and that she needs to work on her writing and grammar...
which she does.
If she does NOT improve her writing and grammar, she's never going to do anything with a business degree.
Why?
The reason is that people will judge you by how you write and speak.
If any of you people actually care about the OP AT ALL, you would be in agreement with me.
If you care about the OP at all, and want to help her, you might say something like;
"Max is obnoxious but yeah, you really do need to improve your writing and grammar for business. It's a really serious part of your career."
But if all you want to do is argue with me...
that isn't helping the OP.
ODD
I heard everyone, last year during the elections, make so much fun of the little "snow flake" college kids that get coddled and treated like babies.
Everyone said, over and over, that when you coddle the college kids, and treat them like babies, they're never going to be able to function in the real world, and they'll never be able to face the COLD HARD REALITIES OF THE WORKFORCE.
Well, here I am treating them like adults, and dealing with the "cold hard realities"... and everyone wants to be angry with me.
Golly.
Blink Blink Blink.
Go ahead and coddle a college kid, and treat her like a baby, and do the opposite of whatever you all said a few months back.
Go ahead.
Do the exact opposite of what you all talked about last year.
Ignoring reality is going to help her a lot.
Go with that.
Talk about how woeful it is to coddle them, and then... coddle them.
Excellent, lol.
That's why they're all messed up.