Lovesong Poetry

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(one of my favorite songs running through my head, I don't know why I like this kind of rock music style, just sounds cool to me.)
Holy Fool
Lyrics by: Troy Duffy

I know there's something happening here

I know there's something happening here
Do my eyes deceive my ears?

Can you feel that man?
Can you feel that man?
I sure as hell can...
Can you feel that man?

Two thousand years I've reigned
As the King of Man
And every morning you felt my guiding hand (yeah)

What'd you do to deserve me?

I spread my wings and my minions sing
I know you heard it, man
Yet my sun still shines on your back
Your mountains..
Your sins..

You gotta come to me
You gotta come to me
With your arms outstretched,
baby (you better come to me)

And on your knees

'Cos I'm your holy (holy)
Your holy fool
I am your holy fool
Yes I'm your holy (holy)
Your holy fool
I am your holy fool

Power has descended forth from my hand
I know you felt it, man
Yet my sun still shines on your back
Your mountains
Your sins

Yes, I know that you fear me..

I call upon you from my holy hill
Sometimes I ask you to live
Sometimes to kill, oh yeah
Sometimes I ask you to kill

You gotta come to me (you gotta come)
You gotta come to me (you gotta come)
With your arms outstretched,
baby (you better come to me)

And on your knees

'Cos I'm your holy (holy)
Your holy fool
I am your holy fool
Yes I'm your holy (holy)
Your holy fool
I am your holy fool
Yes I'm your holy (holy)
Your holy fool
I am your holy fool
Yes I'm your holy (holy)
Your holy fool

 
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aww...it would seem I left out one of my good poems... sorry bout that.. :(


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Poem -37-


Mars Is Not Too Far
Poem by: Lowanla (me)


The Color Of Love is Red
So far in the night sky,
he watches me and kisses my
eyes with his beauty

Among all the stars all
around, he is the only
world I will see

This symbol pays sweet
homage, to my dearly beloved
to know that he, my 'heart' is
out there calling with me

Oh--
and how it comforts me,
on these lonely nights
I need only look for the
color of love, and then
I smile, and am reminded
that
Mars is not too far.
 
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Wolf

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Who Am I?
By: Lowanla (me)

When you are under the sun,
and you are lookin' down that cliff
truth shining through the darkness
I can see a lot of things, obvious,
and you called me blind, helpless..

They are all runnin' scared in the dark
livin' for themselves, scurrying about
tearing each other down,
making they're mark
so afraid to face the truth

its the truth that sets us free..

Hard to get excited anymore
when I already know the plan
and I already viewed the score
there really is no mystery,
behind the hidden door.

I'm just looking for a reason,
I've been running from the truth,
I've had all the angels save me,
but they couldn't keep me from you.

I came from beneath the ground
Yeah I was the poor one
I was rejected, and left behind
the sweetest little lamb, loved
I had nothing, and you took that too.

something drawing you
something pulling you
irresistible
So you say you want me?
Then nothing will keep me from you.
 
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SOUNDS LIKE THE LOVE OF THE FATHER TO US.
 
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Exactly... ;)

Loving till you believe...the same way a child would believe.

Without hesitation or doubt,

I become selfless, dead to the world,
not my own, all for love, and only for love's sake.

only childlike faith makes the impossible, possible.

All for love,
 
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The Red Rope
by: Lowanla (me)


They all watched helpless as she flew;
Poor, poor Lady. If only they knew.
There was a red rope tied around her waist;
she struggled pulling away at first,
but at the end she had begun to chase.

There is a prince on white horse trotting beside;
he told her to come back to where it is safe.
He is filled with so much love for her, but
will not reach out to grab her from her fate.

From time to time she looked at him, helpless.
He looked at her with so much love in his eyes.
For some reason he would not save her or fight;
From the red rope that pulled her foward that night.

Her loving family are waving at her from a distance.
Calling her to draw back to the other side.
She could not hear them any longer;
for they were now too far behind.

The red rope was painful as it pulled her toward the end;
then it stopped, when the prince on the white horse stood in front of it.
She looked at him, the prince with so much love in his eyes;
but still he did not jump off his horse to rescue her from dying.

She looked forward hypnotized, in a love starved craze;
The rope was tied around her waist pulled her once again.
She wandered past the prince on the white horse.
She did look back only once more to say:

"I could not bring my self to stop, even though I tried...
For I am being pulled by love, and love became my drive.
I will always love you even though I may fall this night.
I must go now, my love's ghost is calling me to his side."

-end-
 
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The Red Rope
~Epilogue~
The End
By: Lowanla (me)



The red rope pulled her to
her final end. The Lady,
collapsed before she reached
the end of the cliff.
She peeked over and looked down;
in shock; she had seen her long,
lost beloved hanging at the other
end of the rope by his waist,
unconscious.

She grabbed onto a nearby stone,
firmly placed into the ground.
Yelling out his name, "Valentine!"
He looked up weakly, opening his eyes.
She sobbed in so much pain, and cried.
"I thought I lost you, I thought you died.."
she held onto the rope that kept him
from falling into the bottom of the cliff.

He felt a renewed ray of hope,
seeing his love tied to the other side.
It had been a very long time;
He had planned to see her again,
the one he loved, just one more time.
the only way was a red rope bind to her.
That caused them both to be tied.

He mustered all his strength, to
lift himself up as much as he could,
but for all of the days that he was
out there; he had no strength left,
only enough to touch her hand.

She was laying on her stomach;
Looking down at her Valentine.
Her tears fell upon his face.
"...I love you, believe me."
He sighed, and smiled weakly,
"I do, believe me."

She passes out from holding on;
Slowly dragging over the edge;
The prince hops off the horse,
he was still holding onto the reigns,

he catches her with one hand.
Wrapping the red rope around
his own waist, he held onto her arm.
Looking at Valentine who was
barely hanging on at the end.
The prince pulls out his sword;
he grimaces, and looks down
at the red rope.

"..just cut me loose, then
you can save her." Valentine looked
at his love with sadness in his eyes.
his hand softly touched her cheek.
"..I never wanted this, I just wanted
to see her again..one last time."

The prince gave out a painful yell,
The red rope tightened around his waist.
He swung his sword into the air,
he dug it deep into the ground,
holding the reigns of the horse tightly.

The rain beat down upon them
like ice needles on their skin;
the lighting struck across the sky;
the thunder vociferated across the land;
The prince gave a final yell for
the horse to move back.

The horse withdrew a final backward pull,
All three of them flew backward
safely away from the ledge.

Wiping off the mud the prince stood.
With all of his might, Valentine lifted his head.
Looking up at the prince who delivered them
from falling into the jaws of final death.
"but why would you rescue me too?
I thought we were enemies,
I thought you hated me."

Sarcastically, Valentine laughed,
and collapsed into the mud;
he fell unconscious into a peaceful rest.
The prince looked down at him and said.
"You are making assumptions of someone
you have never even met, just yet..."

~ The Next Day ~

Valentine awoke in her arms;
she was resting sound asleep;
they lay in a flower garden.
Through the willows peeked,
the playful sun's gentle rays;
so peaceful caressing his face.

Pulling her close to himself;
He whispered in her ear;
singing a sonnet revealing fears;
holding her with all his might;
"yes." with tears she cried.
the curse was finally broken
off him, the red rope bind.

They were wed at noon;
the radiant sun glistened
upon the river stream nearby;
The Prince was reading aloud.
"You may now kiss the bride."

From that day forward;
After being separated for so long;
They had finally been reunited;
by their gentle kiss, thought lost.

We bring to a conclusion
the final red rope chapter;
For the rest of their days,
they lived and loved;
happily ever after.

-The End-
 
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My Guy,

believe it or not...I struggled to write this last poem, ~Epilogue of the Red Rope - The End~, you wouldn't believe how hard it was for me to create a happy ending.

I did it for your sake though. Just to give you a rare happy thought for you to keep in your heart.
Although this may not be reality, It is how much I think of you, how special you really are to me.
My message to you is this..

Just because you live in the dark it doesn't mean you don't exist, or that you don't have feelings. You have desires, wants like this, and they are just as important as everyone else. That is how I feel, strongly for you. You mean something to me. Just because I love you. Happy Valentines day.
 
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My guy,

How could you get anymore adorable,
You do the cutest, most sweetest things.

thanks, for that. <3
 
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Wolf

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Love,

I was talking about the valentines gift, so very sweet of you. <3

One of the best qualities about you, you are thoughtful. <3
Love you,
 
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I had a theory about the puzzle I've been working on,

1. the hand is a left hand so it is a males hand...

2. The male always goes in the "left" direction. Counter clockwise

3. The numbers that are on the "left hand"
are obvious numbers that might be answers.
(I'm still working on that..)
These numbers are balanced because the male
is balanced...sure..mmkay.... >...>

4. The female always goes in the "right" direction, clockwise
but in this case she is the unbalanced party, in the relationship,
(or perhaps it is that the feminine side of the person that is out of wack..
or may be it is just a whole new "Formula" of chaos, hmm...I don't
really understand it, its all new to me, interesting...)

I assume that her numbers have to be found
by following her lines and connecting the dots
or in this case...numbers.
---
hopefully this made sense...
I'm not finished but this is how far I got...I did some
research of my own.
 
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Drowning In The Sea
by: Lowanla (me)

Fear was the weight pulling you
down into the sea.
They say blood is thicker than water
fire stronger than ice
so if the key is love to bloom
let the love burn to consume
all fear frozen from you.
Waiting for the right moment
let this love set you free.

Drowning in the sea
kept you from who you
were meant to be.
The fear inside you
pulled you down,
screaming so loud
the unsung sound.
Drowning in the sea.

knowledge, a dangerous power
just follow me through the flowers
If love is stronger, than fear
let the seeds in your heart grow
into a tree made of stone,
and you'll be in the sea no more

Drowning in the sea
kept you from who you
were meant to be.
The fear inside you
pulled you down,
screaming so loud
the unsung sound.
Drowning in the sea.

 
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A favorite song I heard 10 years ago, I still love this song.

Tree Of Life
Lyrics by: Engine

You're staring out to sea

You wonder where you would be
If everything you are
somehow..

Were different in a way
Your life was not the same
A billion things led up
To this time..

If you were born another time

You could travel through the rain
On a European train
Your destination ends ahead
Maybe you live on a desert plain
Waiting for the rain
You would never be the same
somehow...

If you were born another time

If the tree of life were broken
And you never were who you are
It's a curious mix of fate
And your destiny has its place

If you were born another time..


[video=youtube_share;m_bGe0Wnf0Y]http://youtu.be/m_bGe0Wnf0Y[/video]​
 
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I hate you,
for what you callously say;
about how love eventually ends.
About how we aren't going to last.
You're always saying those things..
...it hurts me, you are hurting me..


 
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Fragile Heart Falls
By: Lowanla (me)

you always
grow cold against me
no matter what the situation
no matter what the time, place..

it didn't matter how hard I tried;
love eventually died, and I tried.
I always tried...I tried.

my heart is crushed under the cold.
How I hate your world with no feeling.
I didn't want to be a part of it anymore.
a place without love, for me there is no reason.

Selfish to you, but you didn't see it.
..you didn't see it.

Here we are, bound to lose,
I don't think I believe you.
You set me up to fail, and lose.
the numbness is a virus,
and my heart is heavy,
beating slower, again

You never could control
this power of mine.
To control what I get to see,
that's the beauty of being alive,
I get to die.
I don't have to see,
love end, I don't want to.​
 
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I've always liked this music video since I was a little girl,
kind of wished it happened that way for me, like a fairy tale..
I guess cause I loved drawing cartoons.



Take On Me
Lyrics by: A-ha

We're talking away

I don't know what
I'm to say I'll say it anyway
Today's another day to find you
Shying away
I'll be coming for your love, OK?

[Chorus]
Take on me, take me on
I'll be gone
In a day or two

So needless to say
I'm odds and ends
I'll be stumbling away
Slowly learning that life is OK
Say after me
It's no better to be safe than sorry

[Chorus]

Oh the things that you say
Is it live or
Just to play my worries away
You're all the things I've got to remember
You're shying away
I'll be coming for you anyway

[Chorus]

[video=youtube_share;djV11Xbc914]http://youtu.be/djV11Xbc914[/video]​
 
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This is as far as I got with that puzzle yesterday, but it is only a theory right now,
i don't know that I can prove that it is right...

1.) What I did was trace every shape and line almost exactly. Counted every angle.

For both male and female there are exactly 9 angles. (normally there would be six angles, but
the there are 3 more because of the weird lines that sort of mess up the "Balance" of both..)

2.) I know this sounds messed up but I decided to flip the whole picture upside down,
and I noticed the female was balanced, flipped upside down to look like the male, only she was smaller than the male,
she just had those extra added lines to her, (I have no idea what those mean...) *the roles are reversed*

I assume the lines are there just to create 3 more angles pointed at 3 numbers, making it 9 numbers total.

3. ) In one of the pictures I "assume" there are three 3 correct answers that must be answered one by one correctly
with any of these 9 numbers.

Left Male 60 - 20 - 40
Right Female 5 - 30 - 50
3 extra strange numbers * I assumed go with the female, maybe not) the 3 extra numbers may be the answers..that is
another thought...
extra angles - digit 3 - 25 - 45 (I may be wrong as to where the angles point, but so far this is what I have)

4.) another thought came to my mind, what if you flip the picture over it points to all new numbers....

(yes I think too much...)

I feel too crappy to continue right now.

"and all this time, I thought I thought I was losing my mind that he was a figment of my psychosis I'm perfectly sane!" - Walter Bishop, after trying to give himself a lobotomy, to get the visions out of his head. Ep. 3. season 4
 
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Fragile Heart Falls
By: Lowanla (me)

you always
grow cold against me
no matter what the situation
no matter what the time, place..

it didn't matter how hard I tried;
love eventually died, and I tried.
I always tried...I tried.

my heart is crushed under the cold.
How I hate your world with no feeling.
I didn't want to be a part of it anymore.
a place without love, for me there is no reason.

Selfish to you, but you didn't see it.
..you didn't see it.

Here we are, bound to lose,
I don't think I believe you.
You set me up to fail, and lose.
the numbness is a virus,
and my heart is heavy,
beating slower, again

You never could control
this power of mine.
To control what I get to see,
that's the beauty of being alive,
I get to die.
I don't have to see,
love end, I don't want to.​
Reminds me of that Yolanda Adams song, because of the title. I actually thought about recording that one, with a performance track, but it isn't the style of music that I typically sing. Maybe I should give it a shot though.
 
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